Once upon a time there was a large coffee named Brian who was hyper on caffeine. He then sucked, the jam out of the big jar. Then he got arrested by the military Oreos. Then he went on a eating spree and ate all the Oreos, and ate the city of Foodtopia.
The end
By Julian, Korine, Stanton
I really like this story. It’s very interesting and it makes me wanna read more.
I like your story but it is a little random.
Julian, I think you should provide the context of this story. How was it developed?
I think the story was funny, but you could add more and make it more of a developed story.
I love the humor in this story, it is very funny. I also love the randomness of this story because it’s something that I like and probably act.